Working on the lyrics:

looking for the message you sent
or pictures I thought i took
so i can remember how it went
in my lonely love

thinking things i'd like to say back
when you would give me that look
with me, you somehow just had a knack
in my lonely love

Rearranged the lyrics so that the rhymes are closer together and changed the repeated fourth line to "in my lonely love" which i seem to have found a pleasing rhythm for.