Music lesson

• Listening to my track undeterred
  • It doesn't sound like mathcore, but it sounds good.
  • It's very good at evoking a particular emotion
  • Sounds like it would be in the Phantasy Star Online soundtrack
  • It would sound more like mathcore if it had a more pronounced bass that didn't sustain the notes all the time.
• Listening to Tigran Hamasyan - The Curse
  • Complex rhythms are often played on the same note
  • It still occasionally travels around
  • Very riff-based
  • The bass and drums are locked together when the bass is playing low
• What if I tried to keep in mind what i want to say in my next album for my next attempt in making a song? What use can I find for these rhythms to tell something?